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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Wow, Suswati, this is one of the most moving poems I've ever read. The way the language shifts as the piece goes on was such a powerful way to showcase the deterioration of one's vocabulary when they quite literally can't recall the words they used to know.

I'll be sharing more thoughts on my podcast today as this poem is one of the five shout outs, but I had to leave a comment as well. This was truly incredible.

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Debbie Liu's avatar

Suswati.

this is beautiful.

i had shivers running up and down as i read it. My hippocampus almost spluttered.

you have described the terror of reaching for words that should be there and are not, so well. The last lines:

Even as you wrestle

With the dull ache of memory’s failure,

You know exactly

What the forgotten thing is not.

You know what the forgotten thing is not. Poignant, sorrowful, and achingly true.

Know that your words will return, partially, slowly, trickling in like a cool stream, and then descend upon you in an avalanche, your personal dictionary whole again, and growing.

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